Question

12．请根据下面的提示写一篇介绍鲁迅的100个词左右的文章．
1、鲁迅生于浙江省绍兴，受过传统的中国教育．1902年去日本学习日语和医学．1906年辍学，专攻写作．
2、鲁迅是著名的短篇小说家，在西方，本写的故事非常出名，已被翻译成至少12种语言．
3、在鲁迅的一生中，他致力于保持自己独立的作家地位（maintain one's status）．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲式作文，内容根据下面的提示写一篇介绍鲁迅的100字左右的文章，考生有话可说．要点都已经给了出来．只是需要考生运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出．难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述．还需要自己组织语言，要使用一些好的句式如he went to Japan where he studied Japanese language and then medicine．和：Lu Xun is chiefly known for his stories in the western countries，which have been translated into more than a dozen languages．可以使用一些谚语来提升文章的档次．还要用合适的连接词把各要点连接成完整的文章．
Born is Shaoxing，Zhejiang Province，he received a traditional education．（高分句型一）
In 1902，he went to Japan where he studied Japanese language and then medicine．（高分句型二）
At the same time，Lu Xun is chiefly known for his stories in the western countries，which have been translated into no less than a dozen languages．（高分句型三）

解答 Lu Xun is a very famous short-story writer in China．Born is Shaoxing，Zhejiang Province，he received a traditional education．（高分句型一）In 1902，he went to Japan where he studied Japanese language and then medicine．（高分句型二）Four years later，he dropped out of the school to devote himself entirely to writing．
      At the same time，Lu Xun is chiefly known for his stories in the western countries，which have been translated into no less than a dozen languages．（高分句型三）In brief，in his lifetime Lu Xun managed to maintain his status as an independent writer and established his special fame in the history of China．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．