Question

14．假如你叫李华，最近参加了一次读书会活动．现在，请以李华的名义给你的美国朋友Bob写一封信，介绍此次活动中你和大家分享的一位中国作家：简单介绍该作家、你所读的作品、以及你喜欢该作家（或者其作品）的原因．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Bob，
How are you doing？Recently I attended a reading activity，at which I shared my favorite writer Lao She and his novel Si Shi Tong Tang．
Lao She was one of the most renowned Chinese writers，famous for his novels and plays．His works are deeply rooted in the Chinese society and depict the real-life experience of various people．His representative novel Si Shi Tong Tang，translated as Four Generations under One Roof，vividly reveals the common people's pitiful experience of that age．It is a touching realism masterpiece．
I think a writer is a mighty actor，who can use a pen to write about the whole world．Lao She is such a writer whose works have influenced quite a few generations．That's why I like him and his works．
Bob，can you tell me who is your favorite writer？Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇介绍老舍的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明主题；二介绍老舍的写作特色和主要作品；三喜欢老舍的原因；四询问对方喜欢的作家．
高分句型：
1．Recently I attended a reading activity，at which I shared my favorite writer Lao She and his novel Si Shi Tong Tang．主句里 which 引导非限制性定语从句，代指先行词a reading activity．
近来，我参加了一个读书活动，在这个活动里，我分享了我最喜欢的作家老舍以及他的小说《四世同堂》．
2．His representative novel Si Shi Tong Tang，translated as Four Generations under One Roof，vividly reveals the common people's pitiful experience of that age．句子里translated as Four Generations under One Roof是过去分词做Si Shi Tong Tang的定语； reveals 是谓语动词；that age表示"那个年代"．
他的代表作《四世同堂》，被翻译成Four Generations under One Roof，逼真的揭露了那个年代普通人的痛苦经历．

解答 ossible version：
Dear Bob，
How are you doing？
Recently I attended a reading activity，at which I shared my favorite writer Lao She and his novel Si Shi Tong Tang．【高分句型一】（点明主题）
Lao She was one of the most renowned Chinese writers，famous for his novels and plays．His works are deeply rooted in the Chinese society and depict the real-life experience of various people．His representative novel Si Shi Tong Tang，translated as Four Generations under One Roof，vividly reveals the common people's pitiful experience of that age．【高分句型二】It is a touching realism masterpiece．（介绍老舍的写作特色和主要作品）
I think a writer is a mighty actor，who can use a pen to write about the whole world．Lao She is such a writer whose works have influenced quite a few generations．That's why I like him and his works．（喜欢老舍的原因）
Bob，can you tell me who is your favorite writer？Looking forward to your reply．（询问对方喜欢的作家）
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
我们在写作文的时候，一般应该把亮点放在明显的位置，以便于能够吸引阅卷老师的眼球；同时对于高分句型的使用也要慎重，应该用自己有把握的句子，特别是高考时，应该以正确为首要目的．