Question

1．假设你是李华，正在英国学习，想参加学校的一个"中西文化交流俱乐部"，你希望成为其中的一员．请根据下列要点用英文给组织者写一封申请信：
1．个人情况：年龄，性别；
2．个人条件：英语水平，对西方文化感兴趣，善于与人交流；
3．目的：结交朋友，了解更多中西文化之间的差异．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear sir/madam，
My name is Li Hua and I'm 17 years old．I am interested in joining the Chinese and Western Cultural Communication Club．
I do well in English reading and can speak English fluently．What's more，I'm very interested in Western culture，especially literature and painting．In addition，I've read many great works by famous writers，such as gone with the Wind and Jane Eyre．To be frank，I'm good at communicating and expressing myself．
By joining the club，I hope I can make friends with people from all over the world so that we can exchange our cultural experiences．I'd like to know more about the differences between Chinese and Western traditions and history．
I hope to admitted to the club and look forward to hearing from you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
In addition，I've read many great works by famous writers，such as gone with the Wind and Jane Eyre
此外，我读过很多由著名作家写的伟大的作品，如飘和Jane Eyre．
高分句型二：
By joining the club，I hope I can make friends with people from all over the world so that we can exchange our cultural experiences．
通过加入俱乐部，我希望能和来自世界各地的人交朋友，这样我们就可以交流我们的文化经验．

解答 Dear sir/madam，
My name is Li Hua and I'm 17 years old．I am interested in joining the Chinese and Western Cultural Communication Club．
I do well in English reading and can speak English fluently．What's more，I'm very interested in Western culture，especially literature and painting．In addition，I've read many great works by famous writers，such as gone with the Wind and Jane Eyre（高分句型一）．To be frank，I'm good at communicating and expressing myself．
By joining the club，I hope I can make friends with people from all over the world so that we can exchange our cultural experiences（高分句型二）．I'd like to know more about the differences between Chinese and Western traditions and history．
I hope to admitted to the club and look forward to hearing from you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．