Question

写作

最近，某知名英语学习网站就网站的使用性能、信息面等问题向用户征求改进意见。假定你是张明，请你根据表格中的提示将你的问题和意见以电子邮件的形式提交给该网站。

发现的问题 网上信息更新不是很快；网页形式不够多样

提出的建议：多收集纯正英文原版文章；增加视频和图片使网页更加有吸引力

注意：1．词数120-150；

2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

________________________

________________________

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I抦 very grateful that your website gives me a lot of help in my English study．As a user, I like it very much．However, I also find some problems that need to be improved．

　　First of all, I suggest that the information on your website should be updated in time, so it can be more helpful to the users．Maybe more authentic essays are needed．Secondly, I think the contents should be varied so that the website can attract more users．For example, you can add more videos and pictures．

　　I am looking forward to seeing your improvement and hope your website will be more and more popular．

Yours,

Zhang Ming