Question

11．假如你是英国的Mike，你的朋友李华打算到国外留学，他写信询问你什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐．请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：
1．语言是道硬门槛；
2．适应能力很重要；
3．兴趣爱好被看重；
4．要有社会责任感．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Li Hua，
I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter．
Dear Li Hua，
I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter．Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities．（点明书信的主题）
As far as I know，the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses．【高分句型一】Besides，you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment．What's more，your interest is valued as well，for it has a lot to do with success．【高分句型二】Last but not least，those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed．（简述什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐）
This is some of my advice，and I hope it can be of some help to you．May you succeed!Best wishes and good luck．（表示祝愿）
Yours，
Mike
Yours，
Mike．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封关于什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐话题的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明书信的主题；二简述什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐；三表示祝愿．
高分句型：
1．As far as I know，the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses．句子里As far as I know引导的状语从句，表示"据我所知"；which引导的非限制性定语从句，代指主句提到的这一件事．
据我所知，语言能力是必要的，好的语言能力会有助于你和其他人交流，使你更容易的理解课程．
2．What's more，your interest is valued as well，for it has a lot to do with success．句子里for表示（因为）引导的并列句．
此外，你的兴趣是会被看重的，因为它和你的成功有关系．

解答 【答案】
Dear Li Hua，
I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter．Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities．（点明书信的主题）
As far as I know，the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses．【高分句型一】Besides，you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment．What's more，your interest is valued as well，for it has a lot to do with success．【高分句型二】Last but not least，those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed．（简述什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐）
This is some of my advice，and I hope it can be of some help to you．May you succeed!Best wishes and good luck．（表示祝愿）
Yours，
Mike

点评 考查提纲类书信．
本文采用三段式，语言简练，层次分明，结构严谨，要点明确，布局合理，运用高级句子．I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter．使用宾语从句；those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed．定语从句和被动语态在句中同时出现；May you succeed!运用巧妙；另外，Besides，What's more，Last but not least，的运用为文章增光．