Question

10．假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华，你是一位英语学习达人．请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇关于你学习英语方法的短文，参加学校英语报社的征文活动．
注意：词数不少于60．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画类写作，要求我们仔细看图，根据题目要求写成自己的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：英语学习达人介绍学习英语方法．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为英语学习达人介绍学习英语方法．第二部分为总结结论．
重点短语与句型：
offer sb sth提供某人某物
plenty of 许多
best-selling books畅销书
In a word 总之
高分句型一：Enjoying beautiful English songs on the couch makes me relax and offer me the chance to practice my English speaking and listening as well．此句用了动名词作主语
高分句型二：Now everything is so convenient that we can see the latest English movies in the cinema and we can also review the classic English movies on the Internet．此句 用了so that引导结果状语从句

解答 I am a talent for English learning with different kinds of methods．I often sing English songs，following a tape recorder at home．Enjoying beautiful English songs on the couch makes me relax and offer me the chance to practice my English speaking and listening as well．（高分句型一）Reading original books in the library is one of the most important activities in my spare time．I've read plenty of best-selling books，such as Harry Potter for several times．Watching English movies is an effective way to improve my English．Now everything is so convenient that we can see the latest English movies in the cinema and we can also review the classic English movies on the Internet．（高分句型二）The most challengable activity for me is the English corner on the weekends．In the park near my home，there is an English corner activity every week．I am the most loyal participant．As time passes，I overcome the psychological barriers and can communicate freely with both Chinese friends and foreign friends in English there．（英语学习达人介绍学习英语方法 ）
     In a word，the ways and opportunities to learn English are around us，we can seize them here and there．（总结结论）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧