Question

15．In your spoken English class，your teacher shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．

（请将情景作文写在答题卡指定区域内）

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
He is taking great trouble to①reach the top of the stairs，ignoring②the comparatively lower stairs beside him．
他正不辞辛劳地想爬到楼梯的顶部，而忽略了他旁边的相对较低的楼梯．
①take great trouble to do sth 意为：不辞辛劳地做某事；
②ignoring为现在分词作伴随状语．
句型二：
They are so eager to succeed that①they hope to get to their destinations as quickly as possible②．
他们是如此地渴望成功，以致于他们希望能尽快到达目的地．
①so…that 意为：如此…以致于…；引导结果状语从句．
②as quickly as possible意为：尽快．

解答 In the picture we can see a boy climbing a platform．He is taking great trouble to reach the top of the stairs，ignoring the comparatively lower stairs beside him．【高分句型一】（简述图片的内容，并指出其实质）
The picture reminds me of those who dream of achieving great success every day．They are so eager to succeed that they hope to get to their destinations as quickly as possible．【高分句型二】They don't realize there are longer but safer ways for them to make it．As a result，they may seem rather close to their goals，but the fact is on the contrary．（举例论证图片所反映的实质内容）
In my opinion，we should focus on the process of fighting top success．As long as every step is proper，sooner or later we will gain what we long for．（表达自己的观点）

点评 本题提供的是图画，主要考查考生的观察力、思考力以及表达能力；因此要求考生应结合题目的要求，看懂了意思之后再进行写作；具体做法是：首先，根据图画内容整理出几个要点，再根据这些要点决定要采用的语言形式，包括确定文中的人称，时态以及选用相应的句式结构，并且还要写出自己的看法或感受．