Question

你打算让外国朋友了解新落成的国家大剧院的情况，准备在互联网上制作一个介绍中国国家大剧院的网页。请根据下例提示，为网页写一篇短文。词数不少于70.

Where is the National Grand Theatre located?
(the heart of Beijing, west of Tian’anmen Square)
When did the construction begin and when was it completed?
( in December 2001, in September 2007)
What is the area that it covers?
( 35,5000 square meters)
What does it look like surrounded by an artificial lake? (a big egg)
What kind of halls are there inside the theatre? How many seats are there in each hall?
( an opera hall, paint it mainly gold, 2398 seats; and a music hall, paint it white, 2019 seats)
What are your opinions or feelings about the National Grand Theatre?

Answer 1

Welcome to “The National Grand Theatre”!
Located in the heart of Beijing, west of Tian’anmen Square, the Grand Theater is a modern-style building. The construction began in December 2001 and was completed in late September last year. The theater covers an area of 35,500 square meters. It looks like a big egg, surrounded by an artificial lake. The opera hall is the most important part inside the theatre. It is painted mainly in the color of gold and can seat 2,398 people, while the music hall, painted in white, can hold 2,019 seats.
The theatre is one of the biggest cultural projects in recent years, and it is regarded as a new pride of the Beijingers.

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