Question

20．近年来，作为一种新兴的交流方式，微信 （WeChat） 正变得越来越受欢迎．请根据下列表格提示，写一篇英语短文谈谈微信的利弊以及你的观点，并适当扩展．
注意：1．词数：150左右，开头已给出，不计入词数；2．书写工整、卷面整洁

利	弊
使用便捷	浪费时间
获取资讯	损害健康
便于交流	泄露个人信息
你的观点 …（至少两点）

Nowadays，WeChat is becoming more and more popular in the world，                          ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一篇短文，介绍微信（WeChat）的利与弊，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：微信（WeChat）的利．使用便捷，获取资讯，便于交流；微信（WeChat）的弊，浪费时间，损害健康，泄露个人信息．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为对于微信，不同人有不同的观点．第二部分为介绍微信的利与弊．第三部分为作者的看法．
重点短语与句型：
In addition除…外
an ample amount of  足量的
On the other hand另一方面
As far as sb be concerned就某人而言
be of vital importance 极其重要
高分句型一：Meanwhile，using Wechat，you can also do group chats，or find new friends nearby to talk to，which helps make many friends and express your feelings and opinions more freely．此句用了现在分词using作伴随状语，以及which引导的非限制性定语从句
高分句型二：Therefore，I insist that we shouldn't spend too much time on it．此句insist后跟宾语从句需用虚拟语气．

解答 Nowadays，WeChat is becoming more and more popular in the world．Different people，however，hold different opinions on this matter．Opinions are divided into two groups．（对于微信，不同人有不同的观点）
    According to some people，there are lots of reasons for the popularity of Wechat．First of all，it is easy to use．You can log in to it with your phone number and start a conversation by tapping the speak button．In addition，Wechat is a wonderful platform for people to share an ample amount of information．It even supports sending photos and videos．Meanwhile，using Wechat，you can also do group chats，or find new friends nearby to talk to，which helps make many friends and express your feelings and opinions more freely．（高分句型一）On the other hand，some people argue that although Wechat benefits us a lot，it has some drawbacks．When using WeChat，people tend to forget time and some may even get addicted to it，which will definitely affect their study and work．At the same time，spending too much time on the screen does affect eye health，which may cause trouble．Worse still，people may reveal their personal information while using it，which may lead to crimes．（介绍微信的利与弊）
     As far as I'm concerned，everyone is supposed to exploit Wechat within limits．As a student，I acknowledge that Wechat is not only beneficial but also dangerous．Therefore，I insist that we shouldn't spend too much time on it．（高分句型二）We should balance life's competing interests---in a student's case，study，health and safety．And it's of vital importance for us to protect ourselves when we use it．（作者的看法）．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．