分析 本文主要讲述一些大学生作兼职工作.通过兼职工作,他们可以挣钱帮助支付上升的学费,购买他们需要的东西,获得一些社会经历,拓宽他们的视野.这些对他们来说是很有意义的.
解答 According to∧recent survey,about 25percent of college students have a part-time job.By the upcoming summer vacation,this figure will increase by 72percent.College students were working as tutors,waiters or salesmen.Why do we want part-time jobs?First,they want to earn money to help cover the increasing college tuition.Second,they hope to be economical independent and buy that they need.
In my opinion,by doing part-time jobs,college students must gain some social experience and broaden their outlooks.What's more,part-time jobs can provide to them with a valuable opportunity to knowing the outside world.Yet it's of great significance for college students to do part-time jobs.
详解:
1.加a 考查冠词.survey是可数名词,单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指.
2.by改为to 考查介词.increase by意为"增长了; 以…的幅度增加",increase to意为"增加到",此处应是:增加到.
3.were改为are 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是一般事实,用一般现在时态.
4.economical改为economically 考查副词.independent是形容词,要用副词修饰.
5.that改为what 考查连词.need是及物动词,缺少宾语,用what作其宾语,同时引导宾语从句.
6.must改为can 考查情态动词.can表示"可能",must表示"必须",此处应是:可能.
7.experience改为experiences 考查名词.experience意为"经历",是可数名词,其前有some修饰时用复数形式.
8.去掉to 考查词语用法. provide是及物动词,后接宾语时不需要介词,to是多余的,要去掉.
9.knowing改为know 考查动词不定式.此处动词不定式作后置定语.
10.Yet改为So 考查连词.前后两个分句之间是因果关系,而非转折关系,用连词so.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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