分析 作者通过从网上给妈妈买生日礼物这件事情说明了网络购物的方便快捷,网购使人的生活非富多彩.
解答 One Sunday,I was reading my book while it suddenly occurred to me that it was my mother birthday the next day.However,I forgot it complete.I was worried that I didn't prepare any present to her.At that moment,∧idea of online shopping came to my mind.I clicked the mouse and search some famous shopping websites.Having compared the price of many dress,I chose one with a reasonable price which I supposed my mum would appreciate it and bought it as soon as possible.The next day I received the dress as expected without get out of my room.You see,online shopping is very convenient that it has made our life colorful.
详解:
1.while改为when;考查固定用法,when suddenly表示一件事在进行中突然发生了另外一件事,while则不能与suddenly连用.
2.mother改为mother's;考查名词所有格,名词birthday前面要与所有格形式作定语.
3.complete改为completely;考查副词,此处用副词作状语修饰动词forgot.
4.to改为for;考查介词,prepare sth for sb是固定用法,意为"为某人准备某物".
5.idea前加the;考查冠词,名词idea后面有介词短语of online shopping 限定,故用定冠词the表示特指.
6.search改为searched;考查并列成分,此处searched和clicked是并列谓语,时态要保持一致,故用一般过去时.
7.dress改为dresses;考查名词,dress是可数名词,前面有many修饰,故用复数形式dresses.
8.去掉it;考查代词,这里which引导一个定语从句,关系代词which在从句中作bought的宾语,it多余,故去掉.
9.get改为getting;考查非谓语动词,介词without后面要跟动名词形式.
10.very改为so;考查副词,此处用so与后面的that构成"so…that…"结构,意为"如此…以至于".
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