Question

3．假设你是Lily，你的朋友Alice写信给你，诉说了她的问题，请你根据以下情况，给她写一封回信．
1．父母把她当小孩看待；
2．父母对她要求严格，不准上网聊天等；
3．父母不满意她的成绩．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Alice，
I know exactly how you feel!
              ．
Yours，
Lily．

Answer 1

分析 考查应用文写作．本文要求考生以Lily的身份给朋友Alice写信．因为Alice的父母亲对她要求很严格，不准上网聊天，对她的成绩不满意，并把她当小孩子看待．回信要点：1．你应该和父母亲多交流，多从父母的角度看问题；2．网络聊天是很危险的，我们要尽可能地减少聊天的时间．3．目前对我们来说最重要的是学习，我们要把所有的时间和精力都放在学习上．4．分析成绩不好的原因，寻求老师的帮助．在写作时，要注意使用合适的串联词把各要点串联在一起，不要出现中国式英语的思维，如果可能，可以使用谚语等提示文章的档次．
Even now，there are times when I feel like I'm being treated like a child by my parents．（高分句型一）句中when引导的是定语从句
Chat rooms can be dangerous，and you need to make it clear to them that you understand the risks and know how to get out of a situation that makes you feel uncomfortable．（高分句型二）句中带有that引导的限制性定语从句
If your parents are truly unsatisfied with your grades，I advise you to talk with them and you can get your teachers involved if necessary．（高分句型三）句中If your parents are truly unsatisfied with your grades属于条件状语从句

解答 Dear Alice，
    I know exactly how you feel!Even now，there are times when I feel like I'm being treated like a child by my parents．（高分句型一）One of the hardest things for parents is seeing their kids grow up．You should try telling your parents how you feel，and try to see things from their sides．Chat rooms can be dangerous，and you need to make it clear to them that you understand the risks and know how to get out of a situation that makes you feel uncomfortable．（高分句型二）As for your grades，what matters is that you're giving all your effort．If your parents are truly unsatisfied with your grades，I advise you to talk with them and you can get your teachers involved if necessary．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Lily

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．