Question

5．请以"Failure makes me grow up"为题，并结合自身事例，用英语写一篇短文．
内容：1．讲述一次你的失败经历，带给你的影响以及你是如何应对的．
2．这次经历带给你的启示
注意：除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
Failure makes me grow up
We all know that"Failure is the mother of success．If we can learn to turn a failure to our advantage，we will have learnt another secret to success．            ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文．以"Failure makes me grow up"为题，并结合自身事例，用英语写一篇短文．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．一定要给出自己的看法．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色．
【亮点说明】What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees，without which we cannot arrive at the place where we hope to go．这里含有两个定语从句；Before I decided to give up，it was my math teacher who gave me a hand and told me that failure could also teach us a lesson．这里含有一个定语从句和一个强调句．What she told me encouraged me to face with my math problem bravely．这里含有一个主语从句．

解答 Failure makes me grow up
      We all know that Failure is the mother of success．If we can learn to turn a failure to our advantage，we will have learnt another secret to success．What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees，without which we cannot arrive at the place where we hope to go．（高分句型一） Although failure is annoying，as long as we face it bravely，we will succeed sooner or later．（高分句型二）
      There was once a time when I had difficulty in math．However hard I tried，my math grade was still bad．Later，I failed to pass an important examination．Before I decided to give up，it was my math teacher who gave me a hand and told me that failure could also teach us a lesson．（高分句型三）What she told me encouraged me to face with my math problem bravely．Knowing the importance of failure，I was not afraid of math．Finally，my math grades improved．
      Taking my experience into conclusion，everyone can conquer the unavoidable failure in our life so long as we have faith in ourselves．（高分句型四）Treasure the failure，and you will win the treasure．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．