Question

在生活中，你或者你的朋友都有可能遭遇过这样的尴尬：年长的人不能理解或误解你们这一辈比较流行的文化现象，比如说：“快闪（flash mob）”。请你就此“generation gap”的现象由此展开想像或结合你的实际经历以第一人称写一篇英语短文。内容应包括：1. 你的这次被误解的具体经历；2、你当时的心情； 3、你如何向长辈解释清楚你的“古怪”行为。

注意：1、词数不少于120；

      2、不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

        3、“快闪”只是提供一个例子，你可以自由地选取任何“流行文化现象”进行描述

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Last year, my school club was putting on a cosplay show on the campus, and I was given an important role. Thrilled as I was, I tried not to tell my family about what was going on, which was actually quite natural for a boy in his “rebellious period”.   After getting home from school, I went straight into my room and tried my costume on quietly. When I was making myself up, I got so concentrated that I didn’t hear my grandfather who was asking me to dinner. Much to my surprise, he suddenly opened my door and came in, and it didn’t take long for him to get totally shocked. For what seemed an eternity, the two of us stood in stunned silence, not knowing what to say. Imagine his dismay when he saw me dressed up like a madman!

We both tried to avoid each other later that day, and I could tell he was more than angry. Even my parents put some pressure on me. I didn’t know what to do at first, because I thought he was overreacting—I was just preparing for the show!

I got a little depressed for a while, but realizing it couldn’t solve the problem, I tried to help them understand what cosplay was all about. I didn’t go up close to my grandfather right away. Instead, I went to my parents first. With their support and help, my grandfather finally gave credit to what I was doing. After all, it’s communication that matters.

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

【亮点说明】这篇范文用了一些常见的词组：Much to my surprise“使我惊讶的是”, more than angry “非常生气”，put some pressure on “给….施加压力”， gave credit to“赞扬”，After all “毕竟”,还使用了高级的句型：Thrilled as I was, I tried not to tell my family about what was going on, which was actually quite natural for a boy in his “rebellious period”.这句话用了让步状语从句的倒装句和定语从句， When I was making myself up, I got so concentrated that I didn’t hear my grandfather who was asking me to dinner. 这句话用了so…that…句型， For what seemed an eternity, the two of us stood in stunned silence, not knowing what to say.这句话用了宾语从句，非谓语动词， I got a little depressed for a while, but realizing it couldn’t solve the problem, I tried to help them understand what cosplay was all about.这句话是动名词做主语和宾语从句， it’s communication that matters.这句话是强调句。

考点：考查半开放式书面表达