Question

写作（满分25分）

假如你是高二学生李华，经过半个学期，已经渐渐熟悉了新的老师和同学。对于新的老师Miss Zhang，你有话想对她说，决定按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。

1. 自己意识到了学习英语的重要性；

2. 自己在英语学习过程中的困难，比如单词背不会，口语表达能力弱等。

2. 希望从老师那里得到的帮助。

注意:

1.词数120左右;

2.信的开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Miss Zhang,

As a student of Grade 2, it’s my pleasure to have you as my English teacher. ______________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Dear Miss Zhang,

As a student of Grade 2, it’s my pleasure to have you as my English teacher.

As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.

As far as I am concerned, I do hope to study English well. But I have two main problems in my study. First, it is difficult for me to learn words by heart. Second, I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.

Thank you!

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语As far as I am concerned就我而言；give sb some advice on 给某人关于。。的建议；make progress 取得进步；English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window这个句子mastering English动名词做主语；As far as I am concerned, I do hope to study English well这个句子do用来强调动词hope；Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking.这个句子运用到不定式做表语；First, it is difficult for me to learn words by heart.这个句子it做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式；

考点： 提纲类作文