Question

15．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其正下方写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
     Mistakes are common in our life．But attitudes on them may make a difference．
I still remember how my spoken English improved．At the beginning，I always kept
silently in the oral class to avoid to making mistakes．Before long my teacher knew
about my situation．He encouraged me to speak out that I wanted to speak．Whenever I
made mistakes and felt discouraging，my teacher and classmates will help me find out
how I could avoid it in the future．Practice makes perfect．With time went by，I built up  my confidences，and now I can talk fluently in English．Just as sa ying goes，mistakes are where success lies．We just need to learn a lesson from the mistakes．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文中通过自己学习口语的经历告诉我们，错误是成功的所在，我们需要从错误中吸取教训，然后就能取得进步．

解答 Mistakes are common in our life．But attitudes on them may make a difference．I still remember how my spoken English improved．At the beginning，I always kept silently in the oral class to avoid to making mistakes．Before long my teacher knew about my situation．He encouraged me to speak out thatI  wanted to speak．Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraging，my teacher and classmates willhelp me find out how I could avoid itin the future．Practice makes perfect．With time went by，I built up  my confidences，and now I can talk fluently in English．Just as∧saying goes，mistakes are where success lies．We just need to learn a lesson from the mistakes．
详解：
1、on改为towards/to；考查固定搭配，attitude后面跟介词towards/to，意为"对某事的态度"．
2、silently改为silent；考查形容词，此处用形容词作keep的表语．
3、去掉to；考查动词，avoid doing是固定搭配，意为"避免做某事"．
4、that改为what；考查名词性从句，这是一个宾语从句，疑问代词what在从句中作动词的宾语．
5、discouraging改为discouraged；考查分词作形容词，这两点形容词修饰主语I，指人，故用过去分词形式．
6、will改为would；考查动词的时态，时间状语从句用了过去时态made，主句也要用过去时态，故把will改为would．
7、it改为them；考查代词，此处代词指代上文提到的 made mistakes 和 felt discouraged，故用复数them．
8、went改为going；考查with复合结构，with+名词+分词构成复合结构，此处time与go是主谓关系，故用现在分词形式构成复合结构．
9、confidences改为confidence；考查名词，confidence是不可数名词，没有复数形式．
10．saying前面加the；考查冠词，此处用定冠词the表示特指，特指后面的谚语mistakes are where success lies．

点评 阅读短文，了解大意，确定基本时态；运用所掌握的基本知识多方面分析每个句子以及句子间的结构关系，找出文中错误加以修改．