Question

3．假设你是李华，毕业在即，请你用英文给你的英语老师杨老师写一张Thank-you Note．内容应包括：
1．表达对老师的感谢；
2．陈述老师对你的帮助和影响；
3．表达对老师的祝福．
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Ms．Yang，
I'm writing to express my gratitude to you for what you have done for me．I'm lucky to have you as my English teacher．English is never as easy subject for me．And I'm not a smart or confident guy who can manage all the difficulties with your patience and devotion．I hope in the future I can do the same for others，always ready to reach out．
With the note is a sweet chocolate bar．Wish you have a sweet life．
Sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
I'm writing to express my gratitude to you for what you have done for me．I'm lucky to have you as my English teacher
我写信是想向你表达我的感激你为我所做的一切．我很庆幸有你．
高分句型二：
And I'm not a smart or confident guy who can manage all the difficulties with your patience and devotion．
我不是一个聪明的、自信的可以管理所有与你的耐心和忠诚的困难的人．

解答 Dear Ms．Yang，
I'm writing to express my gratitude to you for what you have done for me．I'm lucky to have you as my English teacher（高分句型一）．English is never as easy subject for me．And I'm not a smart or confident guy who can manage all the difficulties with your patience and devotion（高分句型二）．I hope in the future I can do the same for others，always ready to reach out．
With the note is a sweet chocolate bar．Wish you have a sweet life．
Sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．