Question

2．假定你是李华．你和其他五位同学即将于下周代表学校参加惠州市"英语经典美文诵读比赛"，请给外教Mr．Black写一封信，请他在选材、语音、语调及朗诵技巧方面为你们做些指导．
参考词汇：
英语经典美文诵读比赛 Classical English Literature Recital Competition   语调 intonation
注意：
1．词数100词左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．开头语和结语已为你写好．
Dear Mr．Black，
I am Li Hua，one of your students in Senior One．I am writing to share the exciting news with you that my five classmates and I will take partin the Classical English Literature Recital Competitionof Huizhou on behalf of our school next week．（高分句型一）Hoping to be well prepared for this important competition，we are wondering whether it is convenient for you to spare your valuable time to give us some instruction．（高分句型二）
We would bevery grateful if you could give us some guidance on the following things．We have already selected some classical poems，but would you please help us decide the best one for reciting？And your necessary correctionson our pronunciation and intonationwill be of great value to us．Most importantly，what we need are the skills of recitation，which we believe will perfect our performance under your guidance．（高分句型三）We would appreciate it very much if you could take some time to guide us through all these difficulties．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华．你和其他五位同学即将于下周代表学校参加惠州市"英语经典美文诵读比赛"，请给外教Mr．Black写一封信，请他在选材、语音、语调及朗诵技巧方面为你们做些指导，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：take part in参加；be well prepared for 为…做好准备；be of great value 非常有价值；Most importantly更重要的是；
I am writing to share the exciting news with you that my five classmates and I will take part in the Classical English Literature Recital Competition of Huizhou on behalf of our school next week．（高分句型一）
Hoping to be well prepared for this important competition，we are wondering whether it is convenient for you to spare your valuable time to give us some instruction．（高分句型二）
Most importantly，what we need are the skills of recitation，which we believe will perfect our performance under your guidance．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Black，
I am Li Hua，one of your students in Senior One．I am writing to share the exciting news with you that my five classmates and I will take part in the Classical English Literature Recital Competition of Huizhou on behalf of our school next week．（高分句型一）Hoping to be well prepared for this important competition，we are wondering whether it is convenient for you to spare your valuable time to give us some instruction．（高分句型二）
 We would be very grateful if you could give us some guidance on the following things．We have already selected some classical poems，but would you please help us decide the best one for reciting？And your necessary corrections on our pronunciation and intonation will be of great value to us．Most importantly，what we need are the skills of recitation，which we believe will perfect our performance under your guidance．（高分句型三）We would appreciate it very much if you could take some time to guide us through all these difficulties．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．