Question

11．假如你是李华，高考后想出国留学，但担心不适应国外生活，请给外籍教师Peter写一封信，告诉他你的担忧，请你介绍美国大学生的学习和生活并给出相关建议．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
How is everything going these days？I am Li Hua，one of your students who will graduate from high school this summer and going abroad for further study is my first choice．However，I do have some worries，which brings to the reason for my letter．（说明自己的情况，表明写信的目的）
Studying abroad will surely benefit me in the long run．But on thinking that I will be exposed to a completely unfamiliar environment with no family or friends to turn to，I can't help feeling nervous．【高分句型一】So now I am eager to know what real American college life is and what problems foreign students may come across at the beginning．【高分句型二】Besides，though I have made a lot of preparations for language．I am still afraid that I might have difficulties in communicating with others in English．Could you please offer rue some advice on it？（描述自己担心不适应国外生活，想要了解美国大学生的学习和生活）
I hope my silly questions will not bother you much．With your generous help，I believe I will be better prepared for my college life．Thanks for your time and I am looking forward to your reply．（表达期望和感谢）
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是给外籍教师Peter写的一封信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般将来时．内容包括：一说明自己的情况，表明写信的目的；二描述自己担心不适应国外生活，想要了解美国大学生的学习和生活；三表达期望和感谢．
高分句型：
1．But on thinking that I will be exposed to a completely unfamiliar environment with no family or friends to turn to，I can't help feeling nervous．句子里 on thinking 表示"一想到"，是时间状语；that引导on thinking 的宾语从句；be exposed to 表示"接触"；turn to表示"向某人求助"；can't help 表示"禁不住做"．
但是一想到我会处在一个没有朋友或家人可以求助的完全不熟悉的环境，我就禁不住感到紧张．
2．So now I am eager to know what real American college life is and what problems foreign students may come across at the beginning．句子里 am eager to 表示"渴望去做"；what real American college life is 和 what problems foreign students may come across at the beginning．是两个宾语从句．
所以现在我渴望了解美国大学的真正生活，以及外国学生在开始的时候会遇到的问题．

解答 Dear Peter，
       How is everything going these days？I am Li Hua，one of your students who will graduate from high school this summer and going abroad for further study is my first choice．However，I do have some worries，which brings to the reason for my letter．（说明自己的情况，表明写信的目的）
       Studying abroad will surely benefit me in the long run．But on thinking that I will be exposed to a completely unfamiliar environment with no family or friends to turn to，I can't help feeling nervous．【高分句型一】So now I am eager to know what real American college life is and what problems foreign students may come across at the beginning．【高分句型二】Besides，though I have made a lot of preparations for language．I am still afraid that I might have difficulties in communicating with others in English．Could you please offer rue some advice on it？（描述自己担心不适应国外生活，想要了解美国大学生的学习和生活）
       I hope my silly questions will not bother you much．With your generous help，I believe I will be better prepared for my college life．Thanks for your time and I am looking forward to your reply．（表达期望和感谢）
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

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