Question

圣诞节来临，你班要为国际交流学生Jim举办一次有意义的圣诞party。请你筹划一下需要做哪些准备？例如，邀请哪些人参加、准备什么东西、如何装饰、请哪些人帮忙、如何安排Jim等等。可以简述理由。
注意：字数120-150；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
What should you do if we want to have a successful Christmas party for Jim?   
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  

Answer 1

What should you do if we want to have a successful Christmas party for Jim?
First, we will decide who will be our guests, for example, the teachers, all the classmates and Jim’s native friends if possible. Then we should make cards to invite them to come in advance. Then, arrange someone to make the lists of party food and party drinks and prepare them, for we won’t just sit there, talking. Later, some interesting things, for example, movies or songs, must be prepared depending on the taste of our guests. We can also decorate our room with many beautiful things, such as a big Christmas tree with colorful lights, to make Jim feel at home. All the class will help decorate the tree ourselves, it would just be fun. And last, we will arrange Jim to act as Father Christmas, it is certain to be the highlight of the party.

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