Question

19．学校为了增加学生对中国航天（China Spaceflight）的了解，将邀请北京大学李教授进行一次专题讲
座．参加讲座的学生可以了解中国航天发展的背景、简要历程，神舟系列飞船的发展概况以及中国
航天员的情况．假如你是高中生李华，对此非常感兴趣，请你用英文写一封申请信．
注意：1．词数100左右； 2．要点齐全，可适当增加细节；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
4．参考词汇：教授 professor 背景 background 航天员 astronaut 过程 process
Dear Sir，
I was so excited to hear the news that our school will invite Professor Li from Peking University to give us a lecture about China Spaceflight．I am writing to let you know that I am looking forward to being admitted to the lecture．
As a senior high school student，I am very curious about the background of the development of China Spaceflight as well as its process．Besides，I m also very interested in the situations of Chinese astronauts and the Shenzhou Spaceships series．What excites me most is that I may have a chance to communicate with Professor Li and other spaceship lovers face to face．I know it will be very interesting and rewarding．
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
I was so excited to hear the news that our school will invite Professor Li from Peking University to give us a lecture about China Spaceflight．
我很高兴听到我们学校将邀请北京大学李教授给我们做了一个关于中国航天讲座的消息．
高分句型二：
What excites me most is that I may have a chance to communicate with Professor Li and other spaceship lovers face to face．
最使我感到兴奋的是，我有机会与李教授和其他飞船爱好者面对面交流．

解答 Dear Sir，
I was so excited to hear the news that our school will invite Professor Li from Peking University to give us a lecture about China Spaceflight（高分句型一）．I am writing to let you know that I am looking forward to being admitted to the lecture．
As a senior high school student，I am very curious about the background of the development of China Spaceflight as well as its process．Besides，I m also very interested in the situations of Chinese astronauts and the Shenzhou Spaceships series．What excites me most is that I may have a chance to communicate with Professor Li and other spaceship lovers face to face（高分句型二）．I know it will be very interesting and rewarding．
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．