Question

有统计资料显示，今年春节期间，全国发送短信170亿条。有关短信拜年用“原创”还是“克隆（群发）”的争论很多。一种观点怀疑“克隆（群发）短信”拜年的真诚度，另一种观点则与之相反，认为不管短信是否是原创，祝福也一样真诚。请结合这一现象，用英语写一篇100——120字的短文，发表你的看法。
注：短信text message   克隆的cloned
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Answer 1

Statistics show Chinese sent 17 bin text messages during Spring Festival．People hold different views about exchanging greetings by text message．Some think it's better to use original text messages instead of “cloned ones”．In my opinion．it doesn’t matter much whether text messages are original or not．
It’s acceptable to deliver the same message to a group of people．To mark the Year of Horse in 2014，plenty of messages were witty remarks using “ ma ”，or horse in Chinese，as a homophone to tease recipients for fun or to convey humorous greetings．Actually, text messages are just kind signals to bless you．If one cares too much about the originality of text messages, he misunderstands the motive of others．After a11, it is truly heartfelt greetings not where the greetings are from that really count．

试题分析：这是一篇半开放式作文，开放性作文给出了一个话题，讨论有关短信拜年用“原创”还是“克隆（群发）”的争论，给出了正反方的观点，考生首先要予以交代。但是重点还是要阐述自己的观点，内容要考生自己写，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。
【亮点说明】这篇范文主旨明确，语句通顺，使用了短语以及多变的句式：如： In my opinion在我看来．After all毕竟， Some think it's better to use original text messages instead of “cloned ones”．这句话用了it做形式主语， it doesn’t matter much whether text messages are original or not．这句话用了主语从句和it做形式主语，To mark the Year of Horse in 2014，plenty of messages were witty remarks using “ ma ”，or horse in Chinese，as a homophone to tease recipients for fun or to convey humorous greetings．这句话用了不定式做目的状语， it is truly heartfelt greetings not where the greetings are from that really count．这句话用了强调句。