Question

书面表达（满分25分）
根据下面提示与要求，请以 “Animal In Danger” 为题， 写一篇100—120 词的英文短文。 简单说明原因，并就动物保护措施提出建议。
1．污染使许多动物生存的环境遭到破坏。
2．乱砍乱伐使许多动物失去家园。
3．许多动物被过度捕杀而濒临灭绝。
4．针对以上的原因提出动物保护措施。

Answer 1

As we know, a lot of animals are in danger now. Air and water are being polluted so that the environment in which animals live are destroyed. Besides, many trees are being cut down, making many animals lose their homes. What’s worse, many animals are over hunted for money and are being killed without mercy so that some of them are in danger of dying out.
In my opinion, something must be done now. Firstly, natural reserves should be set up to protect the animals. Secondly, all the illegal hunting should be punished. Thirdly, people should be made aware of the importance of environmental protection. Only in this way can we save the animals. To save the animals is to save ourselves.

解析试题分析：对于本文的写作，可以分两段进行。首先对动物濒临灭绝的原因，即污染是生存环境遭到破坏、乱砍乱伐现象、过度捕杀进行阐述，分三层意思进行平行或是递进式的表达，以显出文章的层次感。第二段提出动物保护的措施，对于此部分的写作同样要注意条理清晰，句式富于变化。最后进行总结，说出保护动物的重大意义。
考点：提纲类写作
点评：书面表达是最能体现一个学生的语言运用能力和英语思维理解的题目，议论文的写作一般采用经典的二段或三段式进行行文，议论文是比较容易写的文体。对于表达内容层次时需要使用平时积累的层次关系的短语，多使用被动，倒装、虚拟来提升作文的美度。在平时写作时应该多进行阅读，对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累，并且学以致用，勤积累，多背诵，这样才能作文才能稳步的提升。