Question

2．假设你是某英语报纸的栏目主编Mary，前几天收到一个叫Rose的女孩的来信，信的内容大致如下：Rose的父母在去年被一场车祸夺去了生命，所以她现在搬去跟叔叔一家生活．Rose觉得很难开始新生活，在学校跟同学也相处得不好．她渴望听取你的建议，所以请你写一封回信给她，大致内容如下：
1、安慰她；
2、针对她的现状提一些建议；
3、希望她能好起来．
要求：1、字数120左右；
2、可适当增加内容以使行文连贯；
3、信的开头和结尾已经给出．
Dear Rose，
I'm Mary，chief editor of My Family．
                                                                             
Yours Sincerely，
Mary．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封建议信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一表示安慰，点明书信目的；二提出家庭生活里的建议；三提出学校生活里的建议；四希望她能好起来．
高分句型：
1．Having known about your trouble，I am writing to offer you some suggestions．句子里Having known about your trouble是非谓语动词做状语，know和主语I之间是主动关系，而且发生在am writing to 之前，所以用doing的完成式．
了解了你的困难，我写信给你一些建议．
2．Perhaps，it is you yourself that think too much．句子里it is…that 是强调句式，强调主语 you，yourself 是反身代词，是主语的同位语．
可能你自己想的太多了．

解答 Dear Rose，
      I'm Mary，chief editor of My Family．I am very sorry for your experience．Having known about your trouble，I am writing to offer you some suggestions．【高分句型一】（表示安慰，点明书信目的）
      First of all，your parents must be blessing you in the heaven though they cannot keep you company now．If you feel sad on festivals，why not talk with your uncle and aunt？It's unnecessary for you to pretend to be strong．（提出家庭生活里的建议） As for your trouble in school，I'd like to suggest that you should be confident．On one hand，you should open your heart to your classmates．I don't think they are laughing at you．Perhaps，it is you yourself that think too much．【高分句型二】On the other hand，make more friends．If you communicate more with your classmates，you may find that they are easy-going and understanding．（提出学校生活里的建议）Nothing can defeat a brave heart．I firmly believe that you'll become truly strong and happy soon．（希望她能好起来）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Mary

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作文的时候，在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来．表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误．