Question

8．假设你是李华，学校要求你们下周二下午去听一个"感动中国"人物孙家栋关于航天知识的讲座，你因故不能参加．请给你们班主任Harris发一封邮件请假．
注意：1．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数100左右；
Dear Mr．Harris，
I am Li Hua．Deeply sorry for not being able to attend the lecture on space next Tuesday afternoon．I am writing to you in an effort to ask for a leave．（写信的目的）
To be honest．I am dying to seize the opportunity to learn more about space through the lecture given by Sun Jiadong，one of the ten Touching-China Role Models．However，it is on the same day that I am going to participate in my interview for admission into Beijing University for which I have prepared for a long time．Meanwhile，I want to make up for the missing lecture．Would it be possible for me to have my classmates record the lecture？If so，I can enjoy the lecture later．（请假的原因，以及补救请求）
Hoping to have your permission．（希望批准）
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封请假信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一写信的目的；二请假的原因，以及补救请求；三希望批准．
高分句型：
1．Deeply sorry for not being able to attend the lecture on space next Tuesday afternoon句子里省略了主语和系动词I'm；not being able to 是动名词做宾语；attend the lecture 表示"听讲座"．
很抱歉不能参加周二下午的航天知识的讲座．
2．However，it is on the same day that I am going to participate in my interview for admission into Beijing University for which I have prepared for a long time．句子里it is on the same day that 是强调句式，强调时间状语on the same day；participate in 表示"参加"；which引导定语从句，代指先行词my interview for admission into Beijing University．
但是，我为之准备了很长时间的北京大学录取面试在同一天进行．

解答 Dear Mr．Harris，
      I am Li Hua．Deeply sorry for not being able to attend the lecture on space next Tuesday afternoon．【高分句型一】I am writing to you in an effort to ask for a leave．（写信的目的）
      To be honest．I am dying to seize the opportunity to learn more about space through the lecture given by Sun Jiadong，one of the ten Touching-China Role Models．However，it is on the same day that I am going to participate in my interview for admission into Beijing University for which I have prepared for a long time．【高分句型二】Meanwhile，I want to make up for the missing lecture．Would it be possible for me to have my classmates record the lecture？If so，I can enjoy the lecture later．（请假的原因，以及补救请求）
     Hoping to have your permission．（希望批准）
   Yours，
   Li Hua

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