Question

假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid．Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。

ASSISI ANTS WANTED

Valuable chances ale open for high school graduates who are good at English．Their work is to tend the senior students during the break．

Requirements attached：

1．Good at English．

2．Experienced priority．

Contact us by e-mail：midesch@163．com．

注意：

1．短文词数100字左右；

2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称；

Dear Sir／Madam，

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper. I found this position quite appealing to me.

I’ve just graduated from high school. Luckily I’m good at English and I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have previous experience. During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.

In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work. I’m available for interview at any time. It would be appreciated it if I can get your offer.

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid．Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。招聘辅导员：宝贵的机会对擅长英语的高中毕业生是开放的。他们的工作是倾向于在休息的高中学生。要求：1.英语良好；2.有经验的优先。要把所提示的点写全，把汉语翻译成通顺的英语句子，可根据内容要点适当增加细节，写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩，注意要求的字数在100词左右，不要太多或太少。不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

【亮点说明】I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper.此句含有一个定语从句，且定语从句用的是被动语态；Luckily I’m good at English and I can speak English fluently.这是一个并列句，并用了两个副词和一个固定短语；During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.本句使用了并列谓语结构和used to的用法；In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work.在这一句中运用了宾语从句并使用了一般将来时态，显得文章丰富多彩；I’m available for interview at any time.本句运用了高级词汇available；It would be appreciated it if I can get your offer.这是文章的最后一句，使用了条件状语从句和过去将来时态的被动语态。

考点：考查书信格式的话题作文。