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17．随着网络的普及，不少同学到网络贴吧上去讨论自己的老师．就这种现象，你班进行了一次讨论，60%同学赞成这一现象，他们认为这有助于老师改进教学；40%的同学反对这一做法，他们认为贴吧上有虚假的内容，请就此写一篇作文，并阐明自己的观点．词数：100词左右．（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
参考词汇：post the Internet（在网上发帖）； post（帖子）；improve their teaching（改进教学）
Nowadays more and more students are talking about their teachers on the Internet，and we had a discussion about it．
…．
      
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文第一段就开门见山介绍了这一背景，然后告诉读者这一讨论已有了结果，以便引出下文．
第二段进入正文，讲大部分人支持这一做法．What‘s more的运用使文章语义进一步递进，文章结构更紧凑．第三段则写了另外一部分人的观点，最后一段则是作者表达自我观点．
（高分句型一）What‘s more，when the teachers read the students'posts on the Internet，they can get to know what their students think about them and try to improve their teaching．
用What‘s more表示递进，进一步说明反对的理由；when引导一个时间状语从句，get to  know后面的what…为宾语从句；
（高分句型二）They think some students are rude to their teachers in words，which made it possible that the teachers can't communicate with them．
which引导一个非限制性定语从句，在该从句中使用make it adj that句型．
使用的短语：be for支持；What‘s more而且；be against 反对；made it possible that 使…成为可能；
As far as I am concerned就我而言；

解答 Nowadays more and more students are talking about their teachers on the Internet，and we had a discussion about it．
    （支持人的观点性句子）60% of us are for the idea．They believe the students have known that they have the rights．（高分句型一）What‘s more，when the teachers read the students'posts on the Internet，they can get to know what their students think about them and try to improve their teaching．
    However，（反对人的观点性句子）40% of us are against this idea．（高分句型二）They think some students are rude to their teachers in words，which made it possible that the teachers can't communicate with them．
 （陈述自己的观点）  As far as I am concerned，I am for the students'posting the Internet about their teachers，but they should be honest and polite．
Yours truly，
Li Hua

点评 本题属于议论文写作，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，明确要点．2、注意将叙述、描写等手法结合到议论中，为议论提供依据．3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．