Question

19．根据下面的漫画，联系生活实际，写一篇150词左右的英语作文．

Answer 1

分析 本书面表达是一篇图画类的写作，要求考生展开关于懒惰和天分的讨论．要仔细观察分析图画的画面，按照图意提示写作．并且写作时注意句子的衔接，适当使用连词．同时考生还要注意的是在写作过程中所运用的时态要以一般现在时为主．除此以外，要注意写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性．
重要短语：
have a strong desire to do 渴望做某事，end in…以..告终，play a very important role in…在..中起到很重要的作用，
高分句子：
1．However，regretfully，he is firmly fastened to his original position by the nature of laziness and certainly achieves nothing．本句中副词 regretfully做插入语的使用，丰富了句子结构．
2．Only by working hard and practicing a lot are we able to overcome difficulties and achieve our goals．only位于句首，主句进行倒装，本句是亮点句型．

解答 In the cartoon，the man enjoys being clever and wishes to do a great job．However，regretfully，he is firmly fastened to his original position by the nature of laziness and certainly achieves nothing（描述画面）．
  In fact，you can see many such examples in life．Just as the old saying goes，diligence leads to success while laziness results in failure（引用谚语）．Every task requires hard work，from learning English to building a house．Some of my classmates are definitely clever，and they have a strong desire to go to a famous university，but unfortunately，they are wasting time talking or playing．And consequently，they end in failure（举例说明）．
  Therefore，in my opinion，diligence plays a very important role in life．Only by working hard and practicing a lot are we able to overcome difficulties and achieve our goals（高分句子）．No one can succeed just by thinking without any actions（发表自己看法总结全文）．

点评 半开放性作文留给考生发挥的空间比较大．一般只提供一个话题或一个图片，要求考生合理地进行想象．考生在写作时，需要做到以下几点：第一、认真审题，把握所有信息．第二、确定体裁，把握行文格式．第三、罗列提纲，思考表达方式．第四、组织语言，展开写作． 写作时，运用熟悉的英语词汇、句型等；要尽量运用多样化的句式，注意长短句的结合、简单句和复合句的结合；要注意上下文的衔接，过渡要自然．第五、认真检查，查漏补缺．