Question

  有人说，父母为孩子包办一切是孩子成长的最大杀手。的确，太多的中国家长习惯于

为孩子包办一切。假设你是李华，请针对这一现象给某英语报社编辑写一封信并阐述你的观

点和建议。

    信的要点：

    1.简述这种现象；

    2.分析其弊端（从独立性、兴趣、能力、影响等方面去分析）；

    3.你的观点和建议。

    注意：

    1.字数120左右；

    2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

       3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

 Dear Editor,

       I'd like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily life.My parents tend to

 

make almost all decisions for me.                                                

 

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

        I'd like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily life. My parents tend to make almost all decisions for me. They choose the school and subjects for me. Sometimes even clothing and daily timetables to be decided by them.

        In my opinion, deciding everything for children does not help them but harm in many ways. Firstly, it will make children lack independence ,which is unfavorable to their development in the long run. Secondly, in many cases parents' decisions go against  children's personal ideas and interests, which will make children form resistance and naturally influence their growth.

         I do believe to grow to be independent  is a natural way for everybody. Parents should give us chances to make our own decisions. They may help us make choices instead of replacing us to make choices.

                                                              Yours  sincerely,

                                                               Li hua

 

【解析】 略