Question

最近，你班同学就“课间是否播放音乐”这个话题展开了讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息，用英语写一篇短文，陈述讨论结果及个人的看法、建议。

大部分同学观点	部分同学观点	你的看法
1. 能活跃气氛。 2. 能使大脑得到放松，减轻学习造成的疲劳。 3. 使同学们在快乐的氛围中做好下一堂课的准备。 4. 能给大家带来快乐。	1. 课间时间太短，播放音乐达不到预期的效果。 2. 课间需要的是安静而不是嘈杂的声音。	？

Recently a discussion was held in our class about whether music should be played during the break or not. ______________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Recently a discussion was held about whether music should be played during the break or not. The opinions are divided
Most of the students think that music should be played .As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides, after hard study, music can bring us relaxation, which reduces the tiredness. This can help us make full preparations for the next class. Listening to music also makes us feel happy.
On the other hand, some students don't think so. In their opinion, they can't get the expected effect from playing music, for the class break time is too short. What is needed most during the class break is peace instead of noise produced by music.
In my opinion, it is good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud music during the class break. In this way students can enjoy music as well as have a good rest. Besides, I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students.

试题分析：本文题型是考生非常熟悉的正反观点类的议论文，讨论的话题是“课间是否播放音乐”，有正反两方面的观点。要点都给了出来。在平时的练习中也有相应的模板。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，发表个人意见时使用第一人称。本文的要点均已给出，考生需要使用合适的连接词把孤立的要点联系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高级的词汇词组以提升文章的档次分。
【亮点说明】范文结构清晰，语言使用准确，短语和句型居多：make full preparations for充分准备，be  suitable for适合， In this way 以….这种方式，As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. 这句话使用了非限制性定语从句， after hard study, music can bring us relaxation, which reduces the tiredness. 这句话也使用了定语从句， What is needed most during the class break is peace instead of noise produced by music.这句话使用了主语从句， it is good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud music during the class break. 这句话使用了it做形式主语，还有范文使用了Besides, On the other hand,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。