Question

假设你是星光中学的张红，将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：

目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题。

骑自行车的益处，如能环保有利健康等。

参考词汇：低碳生活(low-carbon life)

注意：1. 词数：120 词左右；

演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数。

Good morning, everyone,

I am Zhang Hong from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles_____________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Good morning, everyone,

I’m Zhang Hong from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is” Let’s ride bicycles” .As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.

How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m concerned , riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t not need any petrol and they are energy-saving . For another bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.

Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!

Thank you for listening!

【解析】

试题分析：首先要仔细审题，确定人称，时态，文体。内容要点要全面，上下段要使用连接词做到连贯。我们在写作中应当遵循语言表述的经济原则，即用尽可能少的形式表达尽可能多的语义内容，力求简洁精练。由于对英语词汇了解和掌握有限，再加上母语对我们思维的影响，写作中常会出现赘词和冗繁的问题。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：好作文应该是紧扣文章主题，遵循特定的文体格式，选用恰当的语言合理组织文章结构，内容统一、连贯，语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当。为了避免太多单词拼写错误，语法错误，不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词，不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇，短语，句式。