假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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5．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Diana，
Yesterday my friend David came round with a new game and asked to play it by my dad's computer．I was a little worried，because my dad used it mainly for his work，and I'm only allowed to use it for my homework．It happened when my dad was out，so we tried out the game．After playing，I took it off the computer．However，when I restarted computer，I found some of my dad's documents miss．Later in the afternoon，my dad used the computer，but couldn't find the document in it．He became very angry，but I dared not to tell him about the game．Now I'm feeling regretful and disturbing．I'm not sure whether a computer's repair shop can get the documents back．Should I tell him the truth，and should I pay to repair it？I wish for your advice．
Yours ever，
Steve．

分析我的朋友大卫带着一款新的电脑游戏来我家，并且请求在我爸爸的电脑上玩．碰巧我爸爸出去了，我们决定尝试戴维的游戏，我们播放完毕后，我重新打开电脑再次检查是否一切安好，结果发现我父亲的文件丢失．当我爸爸用电脑，他不再能在任何地方找到的文件．我没有告诉他我们玩计算机游戏的事，因为我不想让他跟我生气，现在我感觉很糟糕．我应该告诉他事情的起因吗？我要去修理它？

解答 Dear Diana，
Yesterday my friend David came round with a new game and asked to play it by my dad's computer．I was a little worried，because my dad used it mainly for his work，and I'm only allowed to use it for my homework．It happened when my dad was out，so we tried out the game．After playing，I took it off the computer．However，when I restarted∧computer，I found some of my dad's documents miss．Later in the afternoon，my dad used the computer，but couldn't find the document in it．He became very angry，but I dared not to tell him about the game．Now I'm feeling regretful and disturbing．I'm not sure whether a computer's repair shop can get the documents back．Should I tell him the truth，and should I pay to repair it？I wish for your advice．
Yours ever，
Steve
解析：
1．by---on．考查介词．修饰 my dad's computer用介词on，表示"在我爸爸的电脑上"．
2． used---uses．考查谓语动词的时态．本句表示"爸爸主要用电脑工作"，所以讨论的是平时的事，所以用一般现在时态，和主语my dad 一致，谓语动词用第三人称单数uses．
3．when---that．考查主语从句．my dad was out的句义句式是完整的，所以用that引导主语从句，It 做形式主语，It happened that表示"碰巧发生某事"．
4．computer前加the．考查冠词．特指 my dad's computer，用定冠词the修饰名词computer．
5．miss---missing．考查派生词．本句表示"我发现爸爸电脑里的文件丢了"，所以用形容词-missing 做表语．
6．document---documents．考查名词．和上句some of my dad's documents呼应，本句用document的复数documents．
7．去掉to．考查dare的用法．根据but I dared not 可知本句的dare是情态动词，所以dared not 用动词原形tell，因此去掉to．
8．disturbing---disturbed．考查形容词辨析．做表语，修饰主语I，用形容词disturbed，表示"不安的"．
9．computer's---computer．考查名词．表示"电脑修理铺"用名词computer修饰repair shop．
10．and---or．考查连词．Should I tell him the truth，和 should I pay to repair it？是作者的两个选择，所以用or连接两句．

点评考查短文改错．
本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致．各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用．一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多．平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构．修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑．

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