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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修干作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的次下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
If you walk around in some public places, you will notice most of smokers are young people
and some are still middle school students . It is said that in China the number of people smoking
are about 45% . Why do so many people smoke? Some think smoking gives themselves pleasure.
Some even think that smoking can refresh them. In the fact, smoking is a bad habit that makes
great harm to people’s health . Studies of smoking shows that many kinds of diseases have   anything to do with smoking. Smoking itself is a waste, that costs one so much money. Besides
, many fires are often causing by careless smokers. Today more and more people all over the
world want to give up smoking . If you are not a smoker, never start.


【小题1】of 去掉或者后加the
【小题1】still改成even
【小题1】Are改成is
【小题1】themselves改成them
【小题1】the 去掉
【小题1】Makes改成does
【小题1】shows改成show
【小题1】Anything改成something,
【小题1】that改成which
【小题1】causing改成caused

解析【小题1】of 去掉或者后加the (大多数的表达法)
【小题1】still改成even (表示递进关系)
【小题1】Are改成is,主语是the number of people,谓语是单数
【小题1】themselves改成them(这里不要使用反身代词表示强调)
【小题1】the 去掉(固定词组in fact)
【小题1】Makes改成does,固定词组:do harm to对…造成伤害
【小题1】shows改成show(主语是studies)
【小题1】Anything改成something,词组have something to do with和…有关
【小题1】that改成which(非象征性定语从句不能用that引导)
【小题1】causing改成caused(被动语态使用过去分词)

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