Question

假定你是李华，你的英国笔友正在写一篇关于各国中学生课外阅读(extra-curricular reading)情况的调查报告，他给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解相关情况。请你根据以下提示，给他回一封电子邮件。
你校学生课外阅读的现状；
原因分析；
你的看法；
注意：1.根据所给提示，适当发挥，要求内容充实，语意连贯。
2.字数不少于100。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3.邮件中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about                       
                                                                                
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                             
                                                                              
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extra-curricular reading in our school. As a matter of fact, most of the students in our school haven’t realized the importance of reading, especially extra-curricular reading. Therefore, the time and energy devoted to reading are limited. Besides, some students prefer to read comic books, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials.
I think the reasons for such phenomenon are various. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a good habit of reading. They would rather spend time on TVs or computer games instead.
However, reading is obviously beneficial to both our life and study, which can not only broaden our horizon but enrich our life as well. So it is quite necessary for us students to take up reading and for teachers to lessen the amount of homework so that we can have more time to read. 
Best Wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：考查半开放性作文写作。半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。这篇作文是关于中学生课外阅读情况的调查报告。考生可以从本校学生的阅读情况入手，每天阅读时间为多少，一个月要读多少本书等等。分析原因可以从学习的时间太长，留给阅读的时间不够等。在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子： as a result因此, prefer to do… rather than do…宁愿做…而不愿…，be burdened with负担， form a habit of 形成…，the time and energy students devoted to reading are very limited.这句话用了定语从句， So it is quite necessary for the students to take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. 这句话用了it做形式主语和so that句型还有范文使用了Besides, First of all, However,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。