Question

书面表达

假设你是李华，你班来自美国的交流学生Arthur患病住院已有三周，请你用英文给他写封信，主要内容包括：

－询问病情，表示关切

－介绍班级近期活动、学习等情况

－表达祝愿

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Arthur,

________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　一、评分原则

　　1．本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

　　2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。

　　3．词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。

　　4．评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。

　　5．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

　　6．如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。

　　二、内容要点

　　1．询问病情，表示关切

　　2．介绍班级近期活动、学习等情况

　　3．表达祝愿

　　三、各档次的给分范围和要求

　　四、说明：1．内容要点可用不同方式表达。2．应紧扣主题，可适当发挥。

　　Possible Version 1

Dear Arthur,

　　It's three weeks since you fell ill．I guess you have suffered a lot in the hospital, but are you feeling any better now?We're concerned about your health．And we all miss you very much．

　　In the past three weeks, we've been buried in study because the exam is around the corner．But don't worry about your lessons, with which all of us will help you when you are back．Besides the routine work, we held a football match in our grade and our class won the championship．If only you had been with us!

　　We hope you will soon recover and join us in our colorful school life．

　　Best wishes．

Yours,

Li Hua

　　Possible Version 2

Dear Arthur,

　　It has been three weeks since you went to hospital．How are you feeling now?Hope you will recover soon because all of our classmates miss you very much．

　　As you may know, we have just finished our mid-term exam．I am very happy to say that I made great progress this time．I really appreciate your encouragement．Besides, our school's sports meeting will be held next Friday and Saturday．Our class did really well last year and I believe we would get more prizes this year if you were to join us．

　　We are looking forward to your coming back．

　　Take care of yourself!

Yours,

Li Hua