Question

7．假设你是李华，你的好友Susan前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独．请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件．
1．学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；
2．多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；
3．积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣．
注意：1．词数：100左右；  
      2．可适当增加细节．
Dear Susan，
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America，but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice．（高分句型一）
First，you should work hard at English，which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others．（高分句型二）Secondly，why not make some friends？They can help you to forget your loneliness．Thirdly，it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities，which will help to make life more interesting．（高分句型三）By doing so，you will be happier with your new life soon．
I hope you will find these ideas useful．
Best Wishes!
Yours，Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 一．提炼要点：根据所给的提示和要求，本文有四点要求：1．为什么要写信；2．学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；3．多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；4．积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加丰富有趣．
二．词汇储备：1．适应…很困难 having trouble adapting to；2．学好英语 work hard at English；3．和…交流 communicate with；4．交朋友 make some friends；5．积极参加 take an active part in．
三、根据所提炼的要点，使用恰当的句式把单词和短语扩充成正确的句子；在组词成句时要注意动词的时态、名词的单复数，主谓一致，人称一致，单词拼写等，可适当使用一些复合句式．
四、连句成篇：连句成篇时，根据确定好的文章结构和要表达的内容排列成句，使用适当的连接词，是句与句之间具有逻辑性，短文层次清晰、表达连贯．

解答 Dear Susan，
       I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America，but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice．（高分句型一）
      First，you should work hard at English，which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others．（高分句型二）Secondly，why not make some friends？They can help you to forget your loneliness．Thirdly，it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities，which will help to make life more interesting．（高分句型三）By doing so，you will be happier with your new life soon．
     I hope you will find these ideas useful．
     Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．