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5．住房条件宽敞、整洁、环境优美语言优势擅长英语，父母是英语老师，没有交流困难接待经验两个月前接待过 3 名英国学生参观游览母亲可驾车陪同参观附近的名胜其它（内容由考生自己添加）
假如你是李华，是重庆市某中学学生．最近你校在为一批来自澳大利亚的学生征寻住宿家 庭，你有意申请．请根据下面提供的信息用英语给校长写封信，说明你申请的理由．
注意：1．文章必须包括所有要点，而且结构完整、行文连贯．
2．词数 100 字左右．信的开头与结尾已经写好，不计入总词．
Dear sir，
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the Austrilian students．
（介绍住房条件） We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city．（高分句型一）I'm good at English and my parents are both professors of English，so I'm sure we won't have any difficulty communicating with English speakers．（语言优势）My father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest in our own car．（接待经验）Last month we received two American students．We had a great time．Besides，my mother cooks well，so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food．
（高分句型二） I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them．
Looking forward to your reply．

Yours，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李华，是重庆市某中学学生．最近你校在为一批来自澳大利亚的学生征寻住宿家 庭，你有意申请．请根据下面提供的信息用英语给校长写封信，说明你申请的理由，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：住房条件宽敞、整洁、环境优美语言优势擅长英语，父母是英语老师，没有交流困难接待经验两个月前接待过； 3名英国学生参观游览母亲可驾车陪同参观附近的名胜其它  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
（高分句型一）We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city． 
该句型使用which引导的一个非限制性定语从句，which指先行词a large and clean house； 
（高分句型二）  I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them． 
该句使用了  I would greatly appreciate it if…如果…我会很感激的…
高级词汇：lie in坐落于；have any difficulty in 做某事有困难；places of interest 名胜古迹； appreciate 感激；

解答 Dear sir，
       I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the Austrilian students． 
    （介绍住房条件） We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city．（高分句型一）I'm good at English and my parents are both professors of English，so I'm sure we won't have any difficulty communicating with English speakers．（语言优势）My father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest in our own car．（接待经验）Last month we received two American students．We had a great time．Besides，my mother cooks well，so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food．  （高分句型二） 
        I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them． 
        Looking forward to your reply． 
 
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．