Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处

Recently I have read an article in a magazine. It was about the mother who was worried about her son just because of he always kept his hair long. The mother thought that was not right, but the son felt there was nothing unusually about it. Different generations have different opinion on the same thing. That is what is meaning by "the generation gap". We can see them in our daily lives. Most of our parents like listening to old songs when young people prefer pop songs. Every time my father finds me listen to rock music, he always shouted, "Shut it off. It's awful!" How can we deal the generation gap?

Answer 1

1.the 改为 a mother

2.because of去掉of

3.unusually 改为unusual

4.opinion改为opinions

5. meaning改成meant

6.we can see them改成it

7.when改成while

8.listen改成listening

9.shouted改成shouts

10.deal 后面加with

【解析】

1. 改为 a。 定冠词the表示特指，不定冠词a/an表示泛指。结合句意，这里应该是泛指，故将the改为a。

2. of去掉of。 because是连词，其后接原因状语从句或回答以why开头的问句；而because of是复合介词，其后接名词、代词或动名词，或者what引导的名词性从句。 原句中的because of后面是一个普通的陈述句，故去掉of。

3. 改为unusual。形容词修饰名词；副词修饰动词的。这里的unusual是形容词，修饰名词nothing。故将unusually 改为unusual

4. different opinion on the same thing对同一事物有不同看法。既然看法是不同的，肯定就有一个以上，故将opinion改为opinions。

5. 。结合原句That is what is meaning by "the generation gap". 那就是用“代沟”表达的东西。可以得知此处的语气是被动，故将meaning改为meant。

6. can see them改成it。该句的宾语就是上文说的“代沟”作为一个抽象名词，通常用作单数，故将them改为it。

7.

8. find somebody doing something。发现某人做某事，故将listen改为listening。

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10. 后面加with。Deal with固定搭配，意思为：处理…。故将deal后面加上with。

考点：考察篇章理解及语法知识等。