Question

4．请根据以下写作要点用英语写一篇作文：
1．简要说明好的学习习惯有哪些及其重要性；
2．提出你的建议．
注意：
1．题目自拟；
2．词数100左右；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
参考词汇：
培养  cultivate．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据以下写作要点用英语写一篇作文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：简要说明好的学习习惯有哪些及其重要性；提出你的建议 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be up to sb由…来决定；First and foremost，首先；What's more，而且；Moreover而且；from now on从现在开始；
 One of the strongest forces in the world is habit，but whether to be an owner or a slave of habit is up to you．（高分句型一）
 First and foremost，students should concentrate their attention on what teachers say in class，and grasp key and difficult knowledge so that they will have classes effectively．（高分句型二）
Moreover，it is a necessity for the students to do their homework independently just to test how much they have learned．（高分句型三）

解答 One of the strongest forces in the world is habit，but whether to be an owner or a slave of habit is up to you．（高分句型一）As high school students，it is important to form good study habits．
     First and foremost，students should concentrate their attention on what teachers say in class，and grasp key and difficult knowledge so that they will have classes effectively．（高分句型二）What's more，the best students are those who are willing to ask questions and those who are creative．Moreover，it is a necessity for the students to do their homework independently just to test how much they have learned．（高分句型三）
     To cultivate good habits，students should start from now on and every little thing．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．