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3．假定你是李华，你所在的"中国剪纸文化的传承和发展（inheritance and development of Chinese Paper-cutting）"课题研究小组刚刚获得今年的"中国大智汇创新研究挑战赛（China Thinks Big 2016）"二等奖．请你写信给你的外籍教师史密斯先生，感谢他一直以来对你们的支持与帮助．要点如下：
1．比赛时间：4月18-20日；
2．比赛地点：哈佛（Harvard）上海中心；
3．课题与收获；
4．感谢与祝愿．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头与结尾已为你写好．
Dear Mr．Smith，
I am Li Hua，a student of yours．
I'm writing to share with you the good news that our research group has justwon the second prize in China Thinks Big 2016．（高分句型一）It was recently held in Harvard Shanghai Center，from April 18 to20．Here could I give a very big"Thank you"for your continuous help and encouragement？
In fact，the research on the Inheritance and Development ofChinese Paper-cutting has benefited us a lot．Itenables us to know more about our traditional cultures．It also increases our sense ofpride to do more to promoteits inheritance and development．We do hope you can give us further instructions and wish you all the best!（高分句型二）
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 本篇范文结构合理，全文分成两段，很好地完成了文字提示部分的所有任务．而且本文英语思维体现得很好，遣词造句很合理．句式也富有变化，时态和人称使用准确无误，第一段使用一般过去时介绍比赛情况，第二段使用一般现在时叙述个人收获并表示感谢和祝愿．
文章中使用了强调句：We do hope you can give us further instructions and wish you all the best!同位语从句I'm writing to share with you the good news that our research group has just won the second prize in China Thinks Big 2016．这些句式的使用让文章富有变化．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
I'm writing to share with you the good news that our research group has just won the second prize in China Thinks Big 2016．（高分句型一）
We do hope you can give us further instructions and wish you all the best!（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
      I am Li Hua，a student of yours．I'm writing to share with you the good news that our research group has just won the second prize in China Thinks Big 2016．（高分句型一）It was recently held in Harvard Shanghai Center，from April 18 to 20．Here could I give a very big"Thank you"for your continuous help and encouragement？
      In fact，the research on the Inheritance and Development of Chinese Paper-cutting has benefited us a lot．It enables us to know more about our traditional cultures．It also increases our sense of pride to do more to promote its inheritance and development．We do hope you can give us further instructions and wish you all the best!（高分句型二）
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．