Question

某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论中学生学习问题。请你结合自身实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。

1.描述在过去三年你遇到的一次学习上的困难以及怎样克服困难的；

2.你对学习中困难的认识；

3.请你对高中生解决学习上的困难提两条建议。

注意：

1.词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

 

As we grow up, we are bound to meet with difficulties in our study.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

A possible version:

As we grow up, we are bound to meet with difficulties in our study. A difficulty I encountered was that I had strong Chinese accent while communicating with others in English, making everyone laugh at me. Confronted with the difficulty, I bought lots of CDs of native speakers' public speaking, and tried to imitate their intonation every day. Besides, I often turned to the teacher for help, who always helped correct my pronunciation. As a result, I made great progress.

We may inevitably meet some difficulties in our study, but each man is the architect of his own fate and success always grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties, due to which we become tougher.

To cope with our difficulties in study, we are supposed to find out the reasons first. What’s more, consulting our teachers can contribute a lot to solving the problem. Only in this way can we perform well and gain success.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文是个提纲作文。写作重点有三个：1. 过去三年遇到的学习困难及如何克服地。2.你的认识。3.建议。因为要写过去，并且要进行总结，所以基本时态：在描写过去时，要用过去时；在进行总结和建议时，要用一般现在时。

【亮点说明】本文使用“三段式”对要点进行表述，要点清晰，行为流畅。在写作中遵从了“短语优先原则”，例如： are bound to ，To cope with ，are supposed to，contribute a lot to ，给文章增添了光彩。而且，与此同时作者注意了“句式多变的原则”，文章里水到渠成地使用了从句、非谓语、倒装等等，例如“A difficulty I encountered was that I had strong Chinese accent while communicating with others in English, making everyone laugh at me.”“Confronted with the difficulty,…”“Only in this way can we perform well and gain success.”，这一方面体现了作者的综合运用语言的能力，另一方面也使该篇文章成为考场上的难得的佳作。