Question

13．The people around you might make or break your life．So choose them cautiously and wisely on your life journey．
注意：
　1．无需写标题；
　2．除诗歌外，文体不限；
　3．内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；
　4．文中不能透露个人姓名和学校名称；
　5．字数不少于120词，如引用提示语则不计入总词数．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
As an old saying goes，a man is known by the company he keeps．So it is of great importance to associate with those who may have a positive effect on you
正如一句老话所说，一个人以他所属的公司而闻名，所以与那些可能对你产生积极影响的人交往是很重要的．
高分句型二：
There he had a deep conversation with me，without which I wouldn't have determined to break up with Henry and returned to the normal route．
曾与我长谈，没有它我就不会决定和亨利分手，回到正常的路线．

解答 As an old saying goes，a man is known by the company he keeps．So it is of great importance to associate with those who may have a positive effect on you（高分句型一）．
　　My experience in junior middle school convincingly demonstrates the point．It was at the beginning of the autumn term that I made Henry's acquaintance and became a friend of his．One day，he said to me mysteriously that he would introduce me a new world．That was the first time I had been exposed to the computer game．From that day on I was frequently dragged into the Internet bar by him，leading to my addiction to it．I still remember the occasion when I was caught skipping class to play computer games and was required to go to my head teacher's office．There he had a deep conversation with me，without which I wouldn't have determined to break up with Henry and returned to the normal route（高分句型二）．
　　A friend can influence your behavior in a positive or negative way．On no account can you afford to make a casual choice．Therefore，see to it that you choose your friends cautiously and wisely．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．