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12．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Bob对去年你在中国西部支教的事情很感兴趣．请给Bob写一封邮件，分享你的经历，内容包括：1．你的支教经历；2．你的支教感受．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语和结尾语已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Bob，
I'm glad to share my experience of being a volunteer teacher for Rural Education Support Project．The project aims to help the students in poverty-stricken areas have the chance to receive better education．I took part in the activities last summer holiday．On July 15，I set off from my hometown and two days later，I arrived at the school in a poor village in the south west of China，where I received a warm welcome．（高分句型二）I taught the pupils English there．To my delight，they were interested in what I taught them．
In order to help rural students gain better reading resources，I posted the information of rural schools on the Internet，calling for more help．（高分句型三）Apparently the power of an individual is not enough，so I hope all of us can give them a hand．
I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Bob对去年你在中国西部支教的事情很感兴趣．请给Bob写一封邮件，分享你的经历．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：你的支教经历；你的支教感受    2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：take part in参加；set off出发；To my delight令我高兴的是；In order to以便，为了；call for呼吁，号召；Apparently明显的；look forward to盼望；
 I'm glad to share my experience of being a volunteer teacher for Rural Education Support Project．（高分句型一）
On July 15，I set off from my hometown and two days later，I arrived at the school in a poor village in the south west of China，where I received a warm welcome．（高分句型二）
In order to help rural students gain better reading resources，I posted the information of rural schools on the Internet，calling for more help．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Bob，
       I'm glad to share my experience of being a volunteer teacher for Rural Education Support Project．（高分句型一）
       The project aims to help the students in poverty-stricken areas have the chance to receive better education．I took part in the activities last summer holiday．On July 15，I set off from my hometown and two days later，I arrived at the school in a poor village in the south west of China，where I received a warm welcome．（高分句型二）I taught the pupils English there．To my delight，they were interested in what I taught them．
       In order to help rural students gain better reading resources，I posted the information of rural schools on the Internet，calling for more help．（高分句型三）Apparently the power of an individual is not enough，so I hope all of us can give them a hand．
       I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．