Question

17．假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华，上周五你们班参观了中国科技馆，请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以"A Day in Museum"为题，给校刊"英语角"写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程．
注意：词数不少于60．
提示词：China Science and Technology Museum中国科技馆
Last Friday，we were organized to pay a visit to China Science and Technology Museum．Upon arrival，we were given an introduction about the various exhibition areas of the museum at the main hall．We listened very carefullyand were attracted to the exhibition of science and life．
Entering the exhibition hall，we were amazed by the splendid space models including the China Railway High-speed （CRH），the spacecraft and the rockets，which appealed many of us to take photos and have a hot discussion．Lots of us agreed that our country is on the high way to getting stronger．Knowing that there's a chance to experiencethe making of the space models in person in the DIY area，we rushed to there without any hesitation．There，under joint efforts，we made a model plane with what we learned in the exhibition hall，which pleased all of us．
Time flied，we didn't want but we had to bid farewell to the museum and the fabulous exhibition．On the way home，the school bus was boiled with excitement．We laughed and promised ourselvesthat we would try our best to make our motherland much stronger．In my mind，there was a sweet dream rising in which Idiscovered an unknown land with a new spacecraft from our Shenzhouseries．Icouldn't help smiling from the bottomof my heart．．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Upon arrival，we were given an introduction about the various exhibition areas of the museum at the main hall
抵达后，他们向我们介绍了博物馆的各种展览区大厅．
高分句型二：
Entering the exhibition hall，we were amazed by the splendid space models including the China Railway High-speed （CRH），the spacecraft and the rockets，which appealed many of us to take photos and have a hot discussion．
进入展厅，我们被灿烂的空间模型，包括中国高速铁路的惊讶（CRH），飞船和火箭，这吸引了众多人拍照，有一个讨论的热点．

解答 Last Friday，we were organized to pay a visit to China Science and Technology Museum．Upon arrival，we were given an introduction about the various exhibition areas of the museum at the main hall（高分句型一）．We listened very carefully and were attracted to the exhibition of science and life．
      Entering the exhibition hall，we were amazed by the splendid space models including the China Railway High-speed （CRH），the spacecraft and the rockets，which appealed many of us to take photos and have a hot discussion（高分句型二）．Lots of us agreed that our country is on the high way to getting stronger．Knowing that there's a chance to experience the making of the space models in person in the DIY area，we rushed to there without any hesitation．There，under joint efforts，we made a model plane with what we learned in the exhibition hall，which pleased all of us．
       Time flied，we didn't want but we had to bid farewell to the museum and the fabulous exhibition．On the way home，the school bus was boiled with excitement．We laughed and promised ourselves that we would try our best to make our motherland much stronger．In my mind，there was a sweet dream rising in which I discovered an unknown land with a new spacecraft from our Shenzhou series．I couldn't help smiling from the bottom of my heart．

点评 本书面表达为议论文，议论文是对某现象或观点进行点评．写作时，应注意按提出、分析、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排文章结构，使用足够的论据来分层次论证自己的观点．