Question

14．假定你是李华，听闻国外某网站要在全球范围内评选"The Most Qualified Student"（最美中学生），请你用英语给该网站写一封推荐信．内容包括：
1．介绍被推荐人（林扬）的基本信息；
2．说明推荐理由．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Editor，
I'm a senior high school student and I happened to hear that your website was hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Student．It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends，Lin Yang．
First of all，he，who is among the most diligent students in our school，not only studies hard，but also behaves well．Secondly，he stands out for his diverse hobbies，including painting and playing the violin．Last but not least，he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need．
Therefore，I here recommend him to you with all my heart and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封推荐信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称黑人一般现在时态．内容包括：一写信的目的；二介绍被推荐人的基本信息和推荐理由；三表示盼望．
高分句型：
1．First of all，he，who is among the most diligent students in our school，not only studies hard，but also behaves well．句子里who is among the most diligent students in our school，是主语he的定语从句．
首先，他是我们学校最聪明的学生之一，不仅学习努力而且举止良好．
2．Secondly，he stands out for his diverse hobbies，including painting and playing the violin．句子里including painting and playing the violin是现在分词定语，和名词短语 his diverse hobbies是主动关系．
第二，他有多种爱好，包括绘画和谈小提琴．

解答 Dear Editor，
      I'm a senior high school student and I happened to hear that your website was hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Student．（写信的目的）
      It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends，Lin Yang．First of all，he，who is among the most diligent students in our school，not only studies hard，but also behaves well．【高分句型一】Secondly，he stands out for his diverse hobbies，including painting and playing the violin．【高分句型二】Last but not least，he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need．（介绍被推荐人的基本信息和推荐理由）
      Therefore，I here recommend him to you with all my heart and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment．（表示盼望）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
篇文章要达到表达流畅，逻辑连贯合理，叙述有序，必须有有效的连接成分，使文章能承上启下．建议考生在一些段意群的开头过渡部分用一些过渡性词语或短语，如：
　　①表转折　but、yet、however、although、nevertheless、in　spite　of、after　all等；②表递进　What's　more、in　addition、besides、further　more、moreover等；③表因果　due　to、because　of、for、therefore、thus、as　a　consequence/in　consequence、thanks　to等；④表对比　on　the　other　hand、instead　of、unlike、on　the　contrary、otherwise等；⑤表总结in　one　word、on　the　whole、in　short、in　brief、in　all等．