Question

假定你是米易中学高一学生李华，到校学习已经半学期了。现在请你根据以下写作要点和要求给你的父母写一封英文信，告知你的所见所闻、所感所悟。
写作要点：
1．学校简介：位于攀枝花南部；环境舒适
2．师资团队：教师耐心、严格；受学生欢迎
3．学科发展：想学理科/文科；并给出原因（自拟两条）文科 Liberal arts理科  Science
4．询问父母近况
要求：
1．短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。2．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。
3．书写须清晰、工整。4．信件中不能出现本人真实信息。
Dear dad and mom,
It’s almost three months since I left you. How I miss you!
Now,                                                                         

Answer 1

Dear dad and mom,
It’s almost three months since I left you. How I miss you! Now, I want to tell you what I have seen and how I'm feeling at Miyi Senior High.
Miyi Senior High , which lies in the south of PanZhiHua City. Its environment is pretty quiet and beautiful, and first-class facilities afford us a good chance to work hard. I'm very satisfied with the teachers as well. As far as I know, not only are they patient with the students, but also strict in studies. They are well received by(are popular with) the students.
As for my studies, I'd like to choose science subjects. On one hand, I'm interested in science and have made great progress. On the other hand, science subjects challenge my potentials and I will have a promising future.
How is everything with you these days? I hope that you are not too tired and do care about yourself.
I’m looking forward to receiving your early reply.

试题分析：考查提纲式作文：这篇作文的提纲很详细，关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要根据所给要点，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】本文结构明确，思路清晰。把内容要点都涵盖了。同时注意应用较高级的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如be satisfied with 对…满意，be well received by(are popular with)受…欢迎，As for 至于，make great progress做出很大的进步，care about关心，It’s almost three months since I left you. 这句话用了固定句型，Now, I want to tell you what I have seen and how I'm feeling at Miyi Senior High.这句话用了宾语从句， Miyi Senior High , which lies in the south of PanZhiHua City. 这句话用了定语从句， As far as I know, not only are they patient with the students, but also strict in studies. 这句话用了倒装句，还有范文使用了 On one hand, On the other hand,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。