Question

高三学子要经历各种各样的考试，在考试中难免会遇到失利，这给同学们造成了很大的困扰。最近，你们在英语课上就考试失利这个问题展开了讨论，请陈述讨论的结果。内容要点如下：
1. 考试失利的好处（两点）；
2. 考试失利的弊端（两点）；
3. 你应对考试失利的做法。
注意：
1. 短文必须包括所列内容；        
2. 词数120左右；
3. 文章标题和开头已给出。
Failure in exams
As we all know, Senior Three students will experience various exams and it is hard to avoid failures sometimes, which greatly upset them.
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Answer 1

Failure in exams
As we all know, Senior Three students will experience various exams and it is hard to avoid failures sometimes, which greatly upset them. Recently, our class had a heated discussion about failure in exams. Here are the results.
We all agree that there are both advantages and disadvantages of failing in the exam. Generally speaking, it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows. To begin with, it reminds students to devote themselves more to their studies. In addition, it helps students realize what aspect they are weak in, thus leading them to improve.
However, some disadvantages may arise from failure in exams. Firstly, it ruins students’ self-confidence so badly that some of them even no longer study hard. And secondly, teachers and parents show their dissatisfaction with these students, which makes the matter worse.
Faced with failures in exams, what I usually do is to turn to my teachers for help. They will always analyze my problems and give me some advice on how to deal with them. Their comfort and encouragement means so much to me.

试题分析：题目要求写一篇讨论考试失利的利弊的作文，写作要点已经给出，可以从三方面来写，第一部分论述失利的好处，第二部分讨论失利的弊端，第三部分写自己应对失利的做法。作文必须包含所有的要点，词数在120左右，开头不计入总词数。注意使用第一人称，正确使用语法和时态，不要出现标点和拼写错误。
【亮点说明】范文使用了定语从句、非谓语动词等语法知识：定语从句As we all know，which greatly upset them，which makes the matter worse；固定句型it is hard to avoid failures sometimes；宾语从句agree that there are both advantages and disadvantages of failing in the exam，what aspect they are weak in；主语从句it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows，what I usually do；状语从句so badly that some of them even no longer study hard；非谓语动词thus leading them to improve，Faced with failures in exams等，语法的熟练运用给作文增色不少；
范文注意使用Recently，Generally speaking，To begin with，However，Firstly，And secondly等衔接上下文，使作文显得结构紧凑、层次分明；
范文还使用了一些短语和固定搭配：arise from，devote ...to，turn to ...for help，how to deal with them等，丰富了作文的内容。