Question

13．假如你叫李华，你校于4月27日组织了一次校园合唱节活动．请你根据以下要点，给你的美国笔友Jack写一封电子邮件，告诉他此次活动的有关情况．
1．活动的目的； 2．活动的时间、地点和方式； 3．你对本次活动的感悟
参考词汇：校园合唱节Campus Choral Festival
Dear Jack，
I am Li Hua，…
How are you doing recently？I miss you very much．Now I'm so excited that I can't wait to share with you an unforgettable experience．
Last Friday，our school held a Campus Choral Festival，aimed to offer students a chance to show their talent for singing．It lasted 3 days and 18 classes participated in this competition．As was required，each class chose 2 songs to prepare and performed on the stage of our school concert hall．All the students were happy to seize this opportunity torehearse．With the help of teachers，we sang very well and ranked 5th among all the participating classes，which was received with much applause．
I am very happy that our efforts have paid off．The festival benefits us a lot．Not only does it help us share the spirit of teamwork and give us relaxation from heavy schoolwork，it has also promoted the friendship among us．What a wonderful time!
Sincerely Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封介绍校园合唱节活动的书信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称，时态以一般过去时态为主．内容包括：一表明书信目的；二活动的目的，时间，地点和方式；三对本次活动的感悟．
高分句型：
1．Last Friday，our school held a Campus Choral Festival，aimed to offer students a chance to show their talent for singing．句子里aimed to 是过去分词做定语，表示"目的在于"，和名词a Campus Choral Festival是被动关系．
上周五，我们学校组织了一次校园合唱节活动，目的在于给学生提供展示他们歌唱才能的机会．
2．Not only does it help us share the spirit of teamwork and give us relaxation from heavy schoolwork，it has also promoted the friendship among us．句子里Not only 位于句首，句子does it help us share the spirit of teamwork and give us relaxation from heavy schoolwork用了部分倒装．
这个活动不仅有助于合作精神，让我们从繁重的课业里解脱出来，而且也促进了我们同学之间的友谊．

解答 Dear Jack，
   How are you doing recently？I miss you very much．Now I'm so excited that I can't wait to share with you an unforgettable experience．（表明书信目的）
  Last Friday，our school held a Campus Choral Festival，aimed to offer students a chance to show their talent for singing．【高分句型一】It lasted 3 days and 18 classes participated in this competition．As was required，each class chose 2 songs to prepare and performed on the stage of our school concert hall．All the students were happy to seize this opportunity torehearse．With the help of teachers，we sang very well and ranked 5th among all the participating classes，which was received with much applause．（活动的目的，时间，地点和方式）
I am very happy that our efforts have paid off．The festival benefits us a lot．Not only does it help us share the spirit of teamwork and give us relaxation from heavy schoolwork，it has also promoted the friendship among us．【高分句型二】What a wonderful time!（对本次活动的感悟）
                                                                                                                Sincerely Yours
                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
提纲类作文都只给出只言片 语的提示，而不是完整的表达．此时我们 就必须在大脑中将各信息点补充完整，适 时使用一些短语和句型，以及各种从句． 此时要记住，"有话好好说，有话慢慢 说"，不要想着一蹴而就．我们有这样的 体验：提纲式书面表达的写作中，我们还 没写几句，就感觉所有要点都已经表达完 了．在写作中一定注意避免这样的情况，