Question

18．假定你是李华，你校的交流生Lucy下周打算去老师家做客，但是她不知道中国人做客有哪此传统，她给你发了一封电子邮件，请你给她一些建议．请你根据下列要点，给她回复一封电子邮件．
要点如下：
1．适当地送一些礼物．
2．介绍中国的餐桌礼仪．
注意：
1．词数100左右．（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Lucy，
I have received your email．You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China．Here are some suggestions received by most Chinese．Firstly，when you visit a Chinese family，you'd better bring some gifts．In China，it is usually considered impolite to visit someone with nothing in hand．（高分句型一）So，you can buy some fresh fruits or a box of milk．What's more，table manners are also of great importance．We Chinese like to treat our guests with many delicious dishes．When at table，you should not begin eating first，but followthe host or the senior one．（高分句型二）Sometimes，the host will help you with some dishes，which is different from western traditions，and you should show your appreciation．（高分句型三）
All in all，just as the old saying goes，"when in Rome，do as Romans do．"（高分句型四）
I do hope you will enjoy yourself in your teacher's home．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息你校的交流生Lucy下周打算去老师家做客，但是她不知道中国人做客有哪此传统，她给你发了一封电子邮件，请你给她一些建议．请你根据下列要点，给她回复一封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：适当地送一些礼物；介绍中国的餐桌礼仪．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Firstly首先；What's more而且；Sometimes有时候；is different from与…不同；All in all总之
In China，it is usually considered impolite to visit someone with nothing in hand．（高分句型一）
When at table，you should not begin eating first，but follow the host or the senior one．（高分句型二）
Sometimes，the host will help you with some dishes，which is different from western traditions，and you should show your appreciation．（高分句型三）
All in all，just as the old saying goes，"when in Rome，do as Romans do．"（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Lucy，
       I have received your email．You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China．Here are some suggestions received by most Chinese．
       Firstly，when you visit a Chinese family，you'd better bring some gifts．In China，it is usually considered impolite to visit someone with nothing in hand．（高分句型一）So，you can buy some fresh fruits or a box of milk．What's more，table manners are also of great importance．We Chinese like to treat our guests with many delicious dishes．When at table，you should not begin eating first，but follow the host or the senior one．（高分句型二）Sometimes，the host will help you with some dishes，which is different from western traditions，and you should show your appreciation．（高分句型三）All in all，just as the old saying goes，"when in Rome，do as Romans do．"（高分句型四）
       I do hope you will enjoy yourself in your teacher's home．
                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．