Question

假定你是李华．希望通过外籍教师Peter找一位英语笔友。请写一封短信．描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：

1．年龄

2．性别

3 ．爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。

注意：

1. 词数 100 左右；

2．可以适当增加细节．以使行文连贯；

3．开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

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                                                                      Best regards

                                                               Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Peter,

I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experience in traveling, taking care of pets or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards

                                          Li Hua

解析:

1.本文生活气息很浓，但恰恰又很好地反映学生流行的交友方式和心理。

2.要求明确，简洁但同时不失开放性，整体难度适中。

3.本文写作注意以下几个方面: 

A. 注意审题时一定看准，“交友条件”包括“年龄、性别，爱好”三项，这是明确的写作要点。

B. 题干中有一个比较隐蔽的另一要点：为什么选这样的笔友？所以要清楚的阐述你的理由

C. 要想全文流畅连贯，必须有一个合适的结尾